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it is 2050 and now the release of the very first virtual reality game fantasy online We join Jacob Taylor on his adventure in the fantasy online and as he make new friends and enemies and gains power. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------this is my first ever writing i cannot say what will happen and sorry for the windows back then ---------------------------------------------------------------------so how was it even the first page do critisize and tell me what you want i might just add them Statistics Overall Score .star-4375-overall-48949b88a2b1401d8cec72e4534e707b:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 1,632 Average Views : 816 Followers : 6 Favorites : 0 Ratings : 0 Pages : 10 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author Walking Disaster