Hey, if anyone reading this could you give me some feedback in the comments about things you don't like about the story? This is my first story ever and it's difficult for me to judge what's working and what isn't because I have the whole world-building document in my head already, which you guys obviously don't.

  Is the physics and math stuff too much or do you like it? It *technically makes sense*, but the language could be a bit advanced and annoying at times.

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  Were the S-tier battles too much, did you hate them?

  What do you think about combat in general? Can you follow what is happening?

  Is there anything you don't understand about the System?

  Does anything feel confusing or inconsistent? What aspects of the story would you like me to expand on?

  Thanks for reading, and have nice day!