Finally...it was a rather long volume than my first and second volume.
I've reflected on advice given at the survey on volume 2 and tried to improve the quality of my story, what do you think?
Questions:
(1 being the worst, 5 being the best)
1. How was the plot in volume 3? (1 to 5)
2. Who is your favourite character in volume 3?
3. Is the pace comfortable? or too fast/slow/unstable.
4. I tried changing my style of writing a little bit to incorporate more descriptive writing. How would you rate it? (1 to 5)
5. How is the world building in this volume? (1 to 5)
6. What other suggestions do you have?
Thank you very much for reading this far and for your responses!
Here are some bonuses:
If you stumble upon this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen from Royal Road. Please report it.
Female Samuel:
Lena in a white dress:
Rosy:
Lastly, the story will go on a hiatus for one and a half months due to academic examinations. Thank you for the support and understanding!