Hey all! Thanks so much for all your support and in reading my story. I have received a lot of great feedback and really useful constructive criticism on my story. it is my first bit of writing and I did not really have a plan going in but just started writing. This was obviously a mistake and shows in the first section of the story (up to chapter 50) then in book 2. I feel I have found my rhythm as I move into book 3 but I think there are just too many issues with the start of the story and so I am most likely going to stop posting as I work on rewriting this story.

  A case of literary theft: this tale is not rightfully on Amazon; if you see it, report the violation.

  I want people to enjoy the story I want to write and at this stage the rewrite is going to be a lot of work. I think I will probably just call the first 50 chapters another story and move forward with it but we will have to see.

  Thanks all for reading!

  Keval