Looking for criticism of my Passion Project / an origin Story to the Project / and my writing Project.

  Hi, I created a Story which then developed into the origin Story of my passion Project.

  After some time, the concepts developed and I thought of a rly cool writing Project, with a bunch of features, while still being held in one overarching Lore of my Passion Project.

  The author's content has been appropriated; report any instances of this story on Amazon.

  Need criticism for almost anything.

  Origin Story:

  Writing Project:

  My passion Project:

  Many of these things are already reaching the range of Books, so do expect a bunch of reading, all emotional and deeply thought over.

  If anything to it interests you feel free to join, it’s still young so there is right now only me :3