1: Ah, I see that Liu Da Guans weapon now, how did he come up with such a design, its so cool!!!!!!! Rogue Zhang
Haha~~Sneaky human~~Sneaky old Liu~~
2: Its hard to move forward without money, not even a single cent, and still having to support a group of subordinates. Its better to quickly settle the territory or dig up the first pot of gold as soon as possible. Otherwise, its always looking up to others, and not only will they be looked down upon, but even their subordinates wont respect them, loyalty cant be guaranteed, this is very realistic. Hmm, a way to make a fortune could be considered by studying the "Warlords Counterattack Record". Having fewer people doesnt matter, as long as the method is correct.
Its alright... I have my own judgment on this matter...
3: HOOHOHOHO, at that time on the front line, Old Liu and Old Dao were so much more innocent than now, but now theyve been corrupted by these beastly people... 5555555...... Lets mourn for Old Lius pure ideology...... Chasing stars and moons
That would be great! Buying Mahjong with a single shot and paying the bill!
Friends who cant see the picture of Gonggong, note that the picture of Gonggong is not problematic, its just 163s album anti-theft chain. As long as you lightly click on the transfer button next to the address bar in the opened window, you can see the pictures carefully prepared by Gonggong... I clicked N times and still couldnt see them.
I dont know whats going on anymore...
5: Something that weighs a ton is pressing down on the protagonists small foot, Im afraid the pressure could sink into the ground... This weapon probably isnt practical yahz
Lao Lius feet are relatively big~~~
6: I think the depiction of Liu Zhens cunning and trickery is enough, although these are part of the struggle art, but for a main character, it shouldnt be limited to this level all the time. Although I havent read "Blood Flow", I believe that as a warrior, he must have many impressive advantages and charming personality that would make girls fall in love with him. Now his behavior should be an early helpless move (but the more I watch, the more I feel like he enjoys it -_-), some small tricks are needed, but too much is not good, especially the impression he gives to the last two girls is more of a plot (and the first time it happened), relying only on these to make them completely fall in love with him is definitely not enough. Something else should happen to highlight his positive image. Looking forward to the next development.
There is only one sentence that has been written so far ～～ Giving a snail beggar a cheese ～～ I remember it myself ～～ Hehe ～～ I noticed it myself ～～
7: I understand that the author updates quite frequently, so theres no need to say more. The writing is really good, and this casual adventure style is very suitable for serialization. At least I enjoy reading a bit every day, following the protagonist on adventures. Relatively speaking, in terms of "recommendations", except for super masterpieces like "Huangdu" and "Xie Feng Qu", others cant compare to you. However, there are both good and bad things - although this style has its advantages, its precisely this style that makes everyone feel that updates are infrequent. Reading 2000 words of your book feels like reading only 1000 words of another book, which is quite frustrating. Moreover, when encountering scenes that require detailed descriptions, 3000 words a day is not enough. I hope that after becoming a VIP, youll update 2 chapters/day initially, and then maintain 4000 words/day - Ill be satisfied with that.
Received～～～Guarantee completion of task～～Thank you for your praise～～
Phalanx formation? How did Old Liu know about this high-tech thing?
Dont you think the wolfs teeth are very dense?
9: Theres another issue with this chapter. Isnt the boss surprised at all that Liu is casually playing around with his black dragon (the two ox-headed brothers brought it)? Of course, the author didnt say whether Liu picked it up or not... but I still feel like this is a small plot hole... hmm... what I want to say is, try not to have problems with these small details... it really affects the feeling... hehe---- a little white who pays attention to this book every day
Yeah... Im aware of that too... So when writing, didnt say he swung it... Wanted to write it as holding the handle and turning it around... Maybe this point is ambiguous...
10: Dizzy, actually want to return the commission???? In the 1980s, it seems that there was no commission, especially for Liu Da Guanren, a peasant-born official who came from the countryside and joined the army, should be even more unaware of what "commission" is.
Kickback ～ purely joking～～ should have appeared in 1986～～～ corruption started from that time～～～ Deng BaBa took office～～
11: Come on!! Come on!! Come on!! Come on!!!!!!!!!!! Can you reveal the update speed after becoming a VIP... I think everyone is very concerned ^_^ At least it should be worth my daily 6 votes....... Hehe, the vote has been left for next months baby.
Around 10,000 characters
12: Cant help but want to respond, please dont portray Old Liu as a good person, the worse the better! firewindJ
Hehe~~Got it~~
13: Its a bit depressing to watch, this bamboo stick is not even hitting the mark, I thought it could make Wangzi bleed a bit! Unexpectedly, unexpectedly! Let our lovely Shock Comrade hit more, for example, when passing by the Mount Market, come and get some unicorn rhino or something as a mount for our lovely Panda Warrior, hehe. Phantom Flight God
Buying rhinoceros at the market????? Sweat~~~~~~~~~~~
14: Ah, first time posting a book review, it took 5 minutes to figure out how to post this. Im so annoyed! I want to ask, is it possible for Lius nose to be fixed? According to his own boastful words, he used to be a handsome guy. Although its said that "beauty is in the eye of the beholder", as a Virgo, I have an old habit of being picky and cant stand anything with flaws. If possible, please help Liu fix his nose, haha, no offense intended, why did you say I was making personal attacks?
Isnt his hairstyle blocking his nose?
15: Big brother, how about a peacock vase? Just say its from the divine continents dancing girl. Long Slope Turtle
Havent thought about it for now... because there are a few beauties appearing later on...
16: Damn, they actually asked for kickbacks openly, Obirasu is too BB and WC. The tiger is very simple.
What does BBWC mean?
17: The picture of the dense array is too small, not shocking at all. Lets make it more shocking. Also, change the appearance of the protagonist, dont make it too ugly. Moreover, give the Panda Warrior a good mount, with the speed of a light cavalry and the impact of a heavy cavalry, it must be mighty and shocking. The protagonist doesnt have any powerful followers, how can that be explained? Neighbors of Kunlun Mountain
Cant find that kind of picture~~~I found it myself~~~~
1: I heard that the main character has always had a Pikachu-like appearance? No room for negotiation? Imagine this, a Pikachu hitting on a beautiful woman with a tail... *vomit* guaguaaaaaa
Sweat~~~~~~~ Ah you~~~~~
19: Awesome! But that wolf fang is really too ugly! Wolf fang + protagonist Piggus appearance + protagonists personality = typical cannibal demon! Ruibo
Lao Liu wants to take out a giant cross sword, thats really not elegant ～～ Besides ～～ the cannibal demons weapon in the book is a stone hammer ～～
20: I think the panda is equipped with long-range attacks, its too... Imagine a panda lying on a tree, holding a bow and arrow, aiming at the target, so cool push push push
Panda is suitable for holding a bow and arrow on top of someones head.
21: Rebate? Officer Da is really too strong! How can you think of this? Admire... The highest state of bamboo stick~~~ But the panda holding a dagger is also too... Still like to hold a red tassel big chopping knife ~ National characteristics ah~~~~~~~ Traceless light ink
See you later...
22: Supplement: I think that since the national treasure is written in, it should be YYed properly. After all, its a national treasure and cant be worse than Western ones! I think it would be better to arm it as a mobile fortress. Ultra-short range (dagger) Short-range (sword, axe) Mid-range (dart) Long-range (javelin) Ultra-long range (small cannon) Defense (shield) Magic defense (***** ) Finishing move (******* ) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hehe:) Desecrated evil knight
The pandas skills will be written later ～～～ They quoted a lot of wonderful changes after getting drunk with strong wine ～～～～～～ Alive ～～～
23: Good books all have a strong personality, dont mention the bloody ones, nor the rainy ones. Director Da must insist on his own unique personality, supporting you. The protagonists personality feels not clear enough, I think the characteristics of a detective are not just about survival skills and combat techniques, but also need to be more prominent in terms of personality. As for whether its a harem or not, having too many women is actually hard to write well, at least I havent seen any good writing on that kind of emotional entanglement. Keep going, looking forward to the next exciting performance! PS: The first time I saw your name, I thought it was Jing Gong and had all sorts of associations with Fourier transforms.
Got it～～But I think ～～Lao Lius personality should be very clear～～～I described his struggles with Tian Dou and Di Dou in the first volume～～Basically, I should have depicted his tough but soft-hearted personality in detail～～My name～～Not just you～～Many people associate～～Haha～
24: Ah, I was going to offer some suggestions and whatnot, like Helens mental state after hearing the princes name. But it seems youve already written this part in advance, so theres no point saying anything now. Hehe. Just a heads up, though - itd be best if you reviewed previous chapters before writing new ones. That way, you can make some changes to upcoming chapters and maybe even get some new inspiration. At least thats how I do it; sometimes re-reading past chapters helps me find things that need fixing and think of new details to add.
Hehe~~~ What have you been busy with lately~~~~
25: The white tiger in World of Warcraft is for female players to ride, why not give the protagonist a strongest follower instead? Alcohol poisoning.
Are the Four Great Inventions considered?
26: The new demon pet shouldnt be too shabby, right? It should at least be a dragon beast or something. Best would be the White Tiger of the Four Sacred Beasts, with wings on its back, how cool is that?
Hehe~~~~~~~ It wont be worse than what you said~~~~~~~
27: To be honest, I really like this book! However, looking at Xiaojings beginning, I always feel that the plot develops too slowly. We can understand that you want to write a very long story. But we dont hope for an anticlimax! Maybe what I said is unnecessary! Xiao Qing
Im a slow starter~~~
2: Hehe, when will the protagonist form a team with PLA characteristics? Its best if the team has equipment like 56-style bayonets + big knife blades + sleeve arrows... The protagonist should show off his grappling fist to that prince... Internet frog
Haha~~~~ This is so exaggerated~~~~
29: Im a poor man, but I also know the principle of sowing and reaping. Actually, whether or not its free, I dont care, the key is that I can find pleasure in reading books. Author, I hope your book quality remains unchanged, thank you!! Fish Tail Lion
Thank you~~~
30: Dizzy, how come there are guys discussing Watanabe Rina and Rai Tojiro? I still like Kawashima Kazutsugu in a school uniform, hoho the cat behind the cows ass
I also like uniforms～～
31: At present, this book already has all the popular elements, the only thing lacking is speed. I dont know how it will be after entering VIP, if the wind isnt too strong, then getting on the new book chart for the first month wont be a problem, and we can strive to get into the top 5 of the VIP chart. With this strength, it all depends on the speed. Anyway, with your current speed, dont even think about entering the top five. Also, publication and VIP income are mutually exclusive, the key reason is the speed. If the publication is synchronized with the internet, then the speed will be limited, its impossible to get faster. Think about Blood Reds book, which publisher can publish that fast? And if the publication is slower than the network, unless you have Blood Reds fame or Smoke Rain Jiangnans strength, otherwise its a street sweepers main road.
Its done! Even youre saying Im slow! Where am I slow?! I update every day!!! Bulge-----bulge
32: Wutong Lan has already become good, I like Shang Lai Du Jing now, hehe knife edge dazzling dance
Little Japans only contribution to the whole world is this...
33: I still want to discuss the pandas weapon. In my opinion, the use of a fish spear is only because of the long time spent traveling at sea, as the pandas living environment and dietary habits would not allow for the use of such a weapon! A long stick might be more suitable and visually pleasing, but its killing power is not strong enough, so its probably why they chose to use a long spear. I think the pictures of panda warriors released by Jingguan are very good, with a great style of weapons used inside. If you add a blade on one side, it should be fine too, with a lot of killing intent, feeling like a giant cleaver! Using a long spear would mean that there wont be many pandas in the future, only suitable as a vanguard unit, with huge close combat power but not good for group battles. And if used as a long spear/javelin soldier type, its a bit wasteful. I suppose the main near-warfare units will still be the Tibetan Mastiffs of various tribes.
This group war temporarily I have written to ～ but the scale is not large ～
34: I topped up 60 bucks, entered VIP, and splurged a bit. Wait for you to enter VIP, refuel! Some suggestions: 1. Old Lius abilities are already sufficient, dont overdo it. Learning a few more battle songs is fine, but please dont make the legendary Star Cloud Lock Chain one of his ordinary moves. If he uses it three times in a row without even spitting out saliva, it wont be exciting anymore. 2. The three girls are good enough, no need for more. Theres already an overwhelming sour taste, and Im worried that if there are too many, theyll start fighting among themselves. The key is that Im afraid that adding more will make them all similar, which would be bad. Now each of them has their own personality, which is good. @NUBIS
I know... Thats impossible... I will have some restraint...
35: A slightly floating impulse... After reading so many book reviews, although Jingguan only spoke briefly each time, I can still feel Jingguans sincerity towards us. I dont know if Jingguan and the vast number of readers know that there is a writer called "Little Cat YELLOW" who writes great books, and in possible situations, updates one chapter every day, with 6,000 to 7,000 words per chapter. Until now, he hasnt entered VIP, updating quickly when things are going well, but slowly when theyre not, yet weve always been supporting him; we dont care about waiting for a year because we believe in the writers promise; we dont care about TJs rumors because we know those are just nonsense. So much nonsense, I just want to tell Jingguan that there is a group of true brothers who support you, and its not worth going against the meaningless noise of Calmmoon.
"Ah~~ Give me the title of that little cats book~~ Help him advertise it a bit~~"
36: Haha ~ No money to join VIP, can only wait and see, sorry about that, Ill just keep waiting until the public version comes out. As long as the book quality is guaranteed, its fine. As for the album pictures, Ive completely given up on them ~ so far, Ive only seen one, its crazy! By the way, before the public version of "Jing Guan" comes out, can you recommend some books to me? Im suffering from book drought...
Yan Leis short stories and novels are all very good reads~~~
37: The protagonists language is even more rugged and refreshing to read. A soldiers language should be wild~~~~~ I hope the protagonists personality can be written more vividly.
Someone has already said it ～～ too rude ～～
3: Ive read many books over the years, but its my first time encountering a book thats both hilarious and reasonable like this!! The character of Jingguan Dada is exceptionally good, although sometimes he can be too serious, perhaps this is also one of the guarantees of an excellent work. -aBin
Hehe~~~ Such praise is truly never tiresome~~~~
39: I currently live in a dormitory, outside the customs of Shenzhen, and its not very convenient to go out. A few days ago, when a colleague went out, I asked him to help me buy a 45 yuan card from Shengda, and reminded him repeatedly N times. Today, when he came back for dinner, I almost went crazy, 3180 helped me buy 45 Christmas cards instead of the Shengda card.
Oh no!
40: If you really want to sell the mermaid, take off that earth-avoiding pearl and set an astronomical price to make it difficult for the buyer. But doing so would create enemies. However, having no enemies is also meaningless! Author, please consider this: if the mermaid is sold, whats the point of the double xiuling seal? Dont tell
How is it possible to sell ～ wont sell ～
41: Actually, if the official splits 4,000 words into 2 chapters... it becomes 2 chapters a day, and naturally feels more abundant. Burn Creek Snail
I did it like this before and got scolded to death haha
42: Haha, the Panda People have finally changed their weapons, but apart from ranged and daggers, how about adding some close-range weapons like swords, axes, or hammers? After all, with their physique, using these weapons would be more impressive. Also, give our Richard a few rare and special ethnic groups (preferably stronger than the Mongols) as subordinates, looking forward to it! Supreme Tyrant
Hehe, definitely, definitely... I guarantee a lot will come out... Dont worry...
Pay respects to all brothers ～～ haha ～～ cant reply one by one ～～ really sorry ～～
