The rumble wasn’t just noise—it was Iron Hold waking, stone groaning like a beast roused from centuries-long slumber, every brick alive with violent promise. Eli clutched Marta’s rusted key, its jagged edges biting his palm. The binding spell pulsed hot at his neck, mirroring his racing heartbeat. In the kitchen’s dim glow, Lira’s eyes locked onto his—sharp, steady, fierce with years of resolve. Her pebble lay still, as if holding its breath.
“Now?” she whispered, voice taut.
“Now,” Eli said, the word tasting of freedom and fear. Four years of scrubbing, watching, waiting distilled into this heartbeat of defiance. The spell flared, a spark leaping from his fingertips—not crushed, but blazing with Mama’s heart, Papa’s will, dreams buried beneath Iron Hold’s weight.
Dax shuffled over—a wiry eleven-year-old, brown hair framing eyes that never ceased counting. “Seventeen guards on the east wall,” he said, fingers tapping a frantic rhythm on the workbench. “Three-minute window at dusk—two minutes, forty-seven seconds now. Goruk’s west, but twitchy.” His counts mapped Iron Hold’s pulse, etched into his mind like a lifeline.
Finn slipped in—quiet, pale, hands clutching a jagged wire lockpick. He tapped his temple twice—plan—then pressed a finger to his lips—shh—eyes darting to the door. The grasshopper in Eli’s pocket twitched, a pulse of hope.
Lira nodded, voice low. “Finn’s lockpick for the storeroom. Dax’s gap to the wall. Your key, Eli—east gate. We move when the beasts hit.”
Goruk burst in, chest streaked with blood, whip dripping writhing shadow-threads. “Double shifts, brats!” he roared, strain cracking his fury. His gaze swept, landing on Eli—grief softening his scarred eyes for a heartbeat. “You, runt—water duty. Move!” He jerked his head to a sloshing bucket.
Marta shuffled over as Eli grabbed it, her scarred face unreadable. She slipped him a bread crust—rough, warm. “They fear what they can’t control,” she muttered, low. “That’s why they cage us.” Her eyes flicked to the guards, then away.
The spell burned as Eli followed Goruk, water splashing his feet—cold, mocking—into a corridor thick with rust, blood, and beast-stink. “Spill it, and you’re scrubbing ‘til dawn,” Goruk warned, boots crunching stone. His whip swung, barbs glinting, shoulders sagging—not just cruelty, but weight. Eli’s grip tightened, sensing a secret sorrow.
They reached a shaft—iron bars over a pit, darkness humming below. A growl vibrated Eli’s bones as Goruk dumped the water, hissing steam curling up. A furious screech answered. “They never forget—neither do I,” he muttered, eyes haunted—a girl with gold hair, her laugh lost to screams. Then they hardened. “Back to work, runt.”
Eli turned, ember blazing—hot, reckless. Goruk wasn’t just a jailer; he was broken, scarred by memories too raw to name. It cracked something in Eli—Iron Hold fractured every soul.
Back in the kitchen, Lira waited, peeling done. “What’d he want?” she whispered, eyes on the guards.
“Water for the beasts,” Eli said, scrubbing with trembling hands. “He’s hiding something.”
“Dax’ll figure it,” she said, nodding to the muttering boy. “Finn’s lockpick’s ready. We’re learning—to shatter these chains.” Her vow echoed, steel in her voice.
Years had sharpened them. Eli’s hands bled less, his eyes saw more. The yard’s western corner—their haven behind a slumped wall—hid them from watchtowers. At dusk, they huddled: Lira whispering star-threads her mama sang, Dax counting gaps, Finn crafting tools. Eli listened, pebble an anchor.
The day the bucket fell, the desert sun burned white. Water pooled at my feet, and Goruk’s shadow swallowed me whole.
“Worthless rat,” he spat, the barbed whip hissing, a deadly whisper in the sudden silence.
Something broke then. Not fear—the crushing weight of it, the years bending my spine. I straightened to my full height, which wasn't much, but it felt significant. “Eli,” I said, my voice stronger than I expected. “Son of Liora and Erin.” Their names scorched my tongue, sweet as stolen honey, a forbidden act of defiance in this place of despair.
Goruk froze. For a fleeting moment, his face contorted—not with anger, but with a flicker of something else. A memory flashed: a small girl, hair the color of spun gold, giggling as she presented him with a crudely made wooden doll. His daughter. Before. Before the Krev, before the loss, before the bitterness had consumed him. His whip hand twitched, then went still. The lines around his eyes seemed to deepen, etched with a sorrow he could never fully erase. Another child, stolen, the thought echoed, a hollow ache in his chest. Then, just as quickly, the hardened mask of the Krev enforcer slipped back into place, a heavy shield against a world that had taken everything.
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“What was that?” I asked.
He spat on the ground, a glob of viscous saliva landing near my feet, and turned away, his heavy boots crunching on the dry earth. But the yard buzzed. Dax mouthed Eli like a prayer, his eyes wide with a mixture of fear and awe. Finn pressed his wire grasshopper into my palm, his fingers lingering on mine for a moment, then tapped his temple twice. Plan.
Later, Marta slipped me a rusted key, her movements swift and practiced. “East wall,” she muttered, her voice rough but low, barely a whisper. “Past the storeroom.” Her eyes, usually dull, held a spark of something akin to hope.
We planned in twitchy whispers, huddling in our shadowed corner, the rough stone a cold comfort against our backs:
Finn traced a map in the dust with a calloused finger, his brow furrowed in concentration, then pointed to himself and made a cutting motion across his throat. Still Krev? His silent question hung in the air, a heavy weight.
“He didn’t strike Eli,” said Lira, twisting her pebble. Its surface seemed to shimmer faintly in the dim light, reflecting the faint glow of the binding spells, a tiny spark in the darkness. She spoke of the threads again, how they seemed to tangle and fray around Goruk, as if his own magic was at war with itself. "His threads... they're different. Like a frayed rope, pulled in two directions. I see... a darkness, yes, but also a faint, flickering light. Like an ember, buried deep."
Dax chewed his thumbnail, muttering numbers, his eyes darting around. “Marta says he lost a daughter. She also said that he keeps a hidden, withered flower pressed between the pages of a stolen book." He looked up, his gaze sharp. "Twenty-three guards on the east wall at night. Seven with stronger weapons. Two shadow-beasts near the gate. The patrols shift every seventeen minutes. We have a window of less than three minutes to get through the storeroom, past the armory, and to the wall."
The shadow-beasts came at night. Their clicking footsteps echoed through Iron Hold's corridors like splintering bones, each step sending vibrations through the stone that set our binding spells humming in warning. They were monstrous things, all sharp edges and shadows, their presence a physical manifestation of the Krev's cruelty. The alarm—a piercing, unnatural shriek—shattered the night, jolting us from our restless sleep. It was unlike anything natural, a sound designed to instill terror, to break the spirit.
My hand found Lira's in the darkness. Four years of shared survival had forged a language in our bones. Two quick squeezes: danger close. A light brush of fingers: wait. The tiny tremor in her grip told me she'd spotted a guard pattern change. Her thumb traced a circle on my palm: escape route clear.
I shook Lira awake. Her eyes snapped open, alert. “Now?”
“Now.” The word tasted like freedom and fear, a dangerous cocktail.
Our dormitory erupted into controlled chaos. Bodies moved in the darkness with practiced precision. Dax's shuffling footsteps counted out a rhythm—three quick, two slow—signaling the guard positions. Finn's silence became a presence, his hands flickering in the dim light, mapping out safe zones with shadows on the wall, pausing to make his signature “shh” gesture, a finger pressed to his lips, a silent command we all understood.
The binding spell around my neck pulsed, hot then cold. The sensation rippled through our group—I felt Lira stiffen beside me, saw Dax's hand fly to his throat. We'd learned to read these warnings. This pattern meant stronger weapons nearby, the kind that made the runes on our skin writhe and burn, the kind that seemed to drain the very air from our lungs, leaving us breathless and weak.
The kitchen reeked of rot and hope. I led them to the gap behind the flour sacks, heart hammering against my ribs. Steam hissed through grates, providing cover, a temporary veil. The clatter of falling pots became our percussion, an orchestrated distraction. Each sound had purpose, each silence its own significance.
Our secret language evolved with every heartbeat. A sharp intake of breath from Lira meant more than "stop" – it meant stop and listen and be ready. Finn's tapping wasn't just counting guards – it was mapping their movements, their weapons, their alertness, punctuated by a firm “shh” when anyone made a noise. Dax's subtle shifts in posture screamed danger more effectively than any shout. He was already muttering numbers, calculating our window of opportunity, his eyes darting back and forth, absorbing every detail.
The binding spells became part of our code. Their heat, their strange resonance with the shadow-beasts' presence—all of it fed into our silent network. When my runes flared, a searing heat, Lira's hand found my shoulder instantly, a silent reassurance, a grounding presence.