Which Blurb do you all like better? Which grabs your attention more?

  Original Blurb, the one I've been using on RR:

  A New World. Similar Life and Body. Best of All, He's Not Sick Yet.

  Nate didn't want to die, but he wasn't exactly opposed to it either. By the time his end rolled around, he'd been sick for far too long already.

  He was determined to enjoy the new lease on life he'd been given. It was still his life and his parents, just with some minor changes. This time around there are cultivators, and monsters walking the Earth.

  This isn't the same world he died on, it's better, his family is still alive on this one.

  Now he just needs to make sure they stay that way.

  Luckily for him, when he crossed worlds, he didn't come alone. Whatever being precipitated the switch gave him a little something extra he can use.

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  Now he just needs to figure out how to use it.

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  New Blurb:

  A New World. A New Body. A Second Chance to Fight—for Life, for Family, and for Power.

  Nate didn't want to die. But after years of battling a sickness that had left him a mere shell of what he once was, he wasn’t exactly clinging to life either.

  Then everything changed.

  His final breath was just a new beginning, one that led to him waking up in a world almost identical to his own. He has the same parents, same name, even the same face in the mirror. But this Earth is different. Stranger. Better in some ways, and so much more dangerous in others. Here, monsters roam the cities’ edges, newly developed cultivation arts shape reality, and dimensional zones pulse throughout the surface of the world like living hearts.

  Not everything is perfect. There is a reason he was able to cross over into that body. Troubles that might be solved with the help of…

  Whatever force pulled Nate across worlds didn’t send him empty-handed. Buried deep inside him is a gift—something powerful, mysterious… something extra. A spark of creation, a source of endless potential.

  If Nate can learn to master it, he might not just survive—he could thrive.

  However, as he will soon discover, power attracts danger, and in this world, monsters aren't the only things that hunt. To protect the people he loves, Nate will have to grow stronger, faster, smarter. Because second chances don’t come free—and this time, he's willing to fight for every breath.

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