The forest trembled.

  Explosions rocked the night sky as a crimson glow bled over the horizon, casting flickering shadows across the high ridge where the Scotch family cabin perched. The thunderous clash of magic and steel echoed through the trees, shaking loose frost from the ancient pines.

  Anna Scotch stirred first. The mother rose from her bed, wrapping a woolen shawl around her shoulders, her face creased with unease. "What is that? Thunder?" she whispered.

  But deep down, she knew it wasn't.

  Soon, the rest of the family had gathered at the doorway, Rhea leading her younger siblings, her golden eyes wide with fear and fascination. "Lucian isn’t back yet, is he?" she asked, but the question hung unanswered in the air.

  The family descended the mountain trail, torches in hand, hearts pounding with dread. As they neared the blackened part of the forest, where the trees grew thick and choked with ash, the sounds became clearer—screams, cracking bones, and maniacal laughter.

  Then they saw it.

  A man screamed as he was lifted into the air by black tendrils of shadow. Lucian stood at the center of the chaos, shirtless, his skin stained with blood and dirt, eyes glowing with dark flame. One of his arms morphed into writhing shadows as he plunged it into a holy knight, tearing through armor like paper.

  Selene stood beside him—or rather, behind him. Once the heir to the throne, now clad in black ceremonial armor, her silver hair wild, her grin savage. She giggled as she gripped a soldier by the face and crushed his skull with a sickening crunch.

  Another purifier tried to run, only for Selene to leap at him, her claws slicing through his tend

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  Chapter 12: The Fracture of Blood and Belief

  The fires had long died down, but the scent of scorched earth and fear still clung to the forest. The purifiers lay scattered—bodies broken, souls drained. Lucian stood amidst them, his expression unreadable, eyes glowing faintly beneath his hood.

  The Scotch family, once hidden high in the mountains, had been found.

  Captured.

  They were brought to the ruins of the purifiers' outpost—a shattered chapel bathed in shadow, its stained glass cracked and bleeding moonlight. Lucian didn’t speak much. He simply watched them, his presence a silent weight pressing on their lungs.

  Anna, the mother, wept for mercy.

  The father raged, called him a monster.

  The youngest children huddled in terror.

  But Rhea… Rhea watched him differently.

  She remembered the nights Lucian had vanished into the dark, returning changed. She’d seen it before anyone. The unease in his silence. The way the shadows moved around him.

  And when Lucian approached them—not with anger, but with quiet judgment—she didn’t look away.

  “I remember,” she whispered when they were alone. “When you used to smile.”

  Lucian’s eyes flickered with something. Not warmth—something colder. Recognition.

  “They took that from me,” he said. “Your people. Your kingdom. Your mother’s queen.”

  Days passed. One by one, the rest of the family broke—some pleading, some defiant. Lucian didn’t flinch. He didn’t torture them, not physically—but he made them see. Visions of their crimes. Of what their kingdom had buried. Of the ritual.

  And Rhea listened.

  She began to ask questions. About the ritual. About Lydia. About the truth.

  And Lucian answered her—not with charm, but with honesty. Harsh, unforgiving truths. And in those truths, Rhea saw a kingdom built on betrayal. A family complicit in silence.

  Eventually, she made a choice.

  She unlocked her own bindings. Walked to Lucian, eyes filled with defiance—not fear.

  “You want vengeance,” she said. “Let me help you burn them down.”

  Lucian studied her. Then, slowly, he nodded.

  Behind them, the rest of the family was left in the woods—alive, yes, but broken, bound by shadow. Left with only their guilt and the dark whispering of the forest.

  Rhea never looked back.