In the dusty hill country south of the Huai River, where fertile plains gave way to stubborn red earth and patchy forests, lay the village of Gan Quan – 'Sweet Spring'. For generations, its name had been a cruel irony. The spring it was named for often ran thin, the soil yielded harvests only grudgingly, and poverty clung to its inhabitants like the persistent summer humidity. They were hardy folk, accustomed to hardship, their lives a testament to resilience etched onto faces lined by sun and worry. Then, about six months ago, Gan Quan's fortunes had inexplicably, miraculously, reversed.
It began subtly. The meagre spring, source of their name and their water, suddenly flowed fuller, sweeter than anyone could remember. Then, despite a season marked by erratic rains elsewhere, Gan Quan's terraced fields produced a harvest of astonishing abundance – grain heavy on the stalk, vegetables plump and vibrant. Unexpected windfalls followed: a forgotten crate of valuable herbs discovered in an abandoned shed fetched a high price in the nearest town; a long-lost jade bracelet, an heirloom mourned for generations, reappeared inexplicably beneath a loose hearthstone; small nuggets of alluvial gold were found gleaming in the stream bed where only pebbles had lain before. Relief, then cautious joy, then outright celebration swept through the village. Debts were paid, roofs repaired, children grew rounder. It seemed the heavens, or the earth spirits, had finally smiled upon Gan Quan.
Many attributed the blessing to the renewed attention paid to the 'Smiling Stone Shrine'. This ancient, half-forgotten shrine stood on a low hill overlooking the village – little more than a weathered, vaguely humanoid standing stone bearing a faint, eroded carving that some interpreted as a benevolent smile, nestled within a small grove of gnarled plum trees. Neglected for decades, considered merely a quaint relic, the villagers, in their desperation during the preceding lean years, had begun leaving small offerings again – a handful of grain, a cup of rough wine, wildflowers – hoping to appease whatever minor local spirit might reside there. Now, with fortune blooming, these offerings became more regular, more elaborate.
Xuanzhen arrived in Gan Quan village drawn by incongruous whispers. He had been in the region investigating reports of unsettled qi along the Huai River tributaries, when he heard conflicting tales from travelling peddlers: stories of a desperately poor village suddenly, inexplicably flourishing. Such abrupt reversals of fortune, especially when localized and seemingly defying natural explanation, often hinted at underlying energetic imbalances or unorthodox interventions. Curiosity piqued, he diverted his path towards the remote hill village.
He found Gan Quan bathed in the warm glow of late afternoon sun, appearing outwardly prosperous. Houses showed signs of recent repair, villagers wore newer, cleaner clothes, and the fields surrounding the village were indeed unnaturally green and lush for the season. Children laughed, their faces fuller than one might expect in such traditionally poor country. Yet, beneath the surface prosperity, Xuanzhen immediately sensed a subtle dissonance. The village's qi felt... amplified, artificially stimulated, yet brittle. There was an undercurrent of frantic energy beneath the smiles, a sharpness in glances exchanged between neighbours, a possessiveness in the way people guarded their newfound gains. The air itself felt slightly thick, carrying a faint, almost cloying sweetness mixed with the scent of damp earth, strongest near the path leading up to the Smiling Stone Shrine on the hill.
He took lodging with the village elder, Master Peng, a man whose weathered face showed a mixture of bewildered gratitude and a nascent, unspoken unease. Peng spoke effusively of their recent good fortune, attributing it to the ancestors' blessings and the efficacy of the offerings at the shrine. He showed Xuanzhen the miraculously full spring, the overflowing grain stores.
"We endured hardship for so long, Master Taoist," Peng declared, his voice thick with emotion. "Now, finally, bounty smiles upon us. The Smiling Stone... it truly smiles now."
Yet, as Xuanzhen spent the evening observing the village, the dissonant notes grew stronger. He saw arguments flare quickly over minor matters – the placement of a drying rack, the price of borrowed tools. He noticed a subtle lack of generosity, neighbours hoarding their gains rather than sharing freely as communities often did in hardship. He saw a strange competitiveness enter their interactions, a constant, anxious comparison of fortunes. And he saw the physical signs: despite the abundance, many villagers looked subtly drained, their skin having a faint, unhealthy pallor beneath their sun-weathered complexions, their eyes holding a restless, slightly feverish light. They seemed energized, yet exhausted, like plants forced to bloom unnaturally fast.
He spoke with Widow Fen, a quiet, observant woman known for her herbal remedies and grounded wisdom, who cared for her sickly grandson, Xiao Bao. Fen confessed her worries privately, away from the elder's optimistic pronouncements.
"The fortune feels... hollow, Master Xuanzhen," she whispered, grinding herbs in her small courtyard, the sweet, cloying scent from the shrine hill faint on the air. "Yes, our bellies are full, our roofs repaired. But the spirit... the spirit of Gan Quan feels thin. People smile, but their eyes are hard. Neighbours count coins instead of sharing tea. My grandson, Bao... he sees things now."
She described how Xiao Bao, a sensitive child, refused to go near the shrine hill. He claimed the 'Smiling Stone' wasn't smiling, but leering, its stone face seeming to shift and writhe in the twilight. He spoke of seeing faint, grasping shadows reaching out from the shrine towards the village at night, shadows that smelled like damp earth and sweet, rotting flowers. He suffered nightmares filled with whispering promises of wealth followed by images of slow decay.
Widow Fen’s account, coupled with his own observations, solidified Xuanzhen's unease. The prosperity wasn't a natural blessing. It felt parasitic. The Smiling Stone Shrine, neglected for years, then suddenly showered with desperate offerings, had likely become an anchor, not for a benevolent local deity, but for something else – perhaps an ancient, low-level earth spirit focused on consumption, or a Fu Gui, a 'Luck Ghost', drawn by the intense desire for fortune, now granting material wealth in exchange for something less tangible but far more vital: community harmony, empathy, spiritual vitality, the very qi of healthy human connection.
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He knew he had to investigate the shrine directly. As dusk began to settle, casting long shadows across the valley, Xuanzhen ascended the winding path towards the hill. The air grew cooler, damper, the cloying sweetness intensifying, mingling with the scent of decaying plum blossoms from the gnarled trees surrounding the shrine. The qi here was thick, stagnant yet pulsing with a greedy, absorbing energy.
The shrine itself was simple: the weathered standing stone, about head-height, vaguely humanoid, its 'smiling' features eroded almost smooth by time and weather. Numerous offerings lay scattered at its base – dried fruits, spilled wine staining the earth, small heaps of grain, even a few copper coins. The stone felt cold, unnaturally so, and seemed to draw warmth from Xuanzhen's outstretched palm. Focusing his senses, he felt the entity bound to it – ancient, earthy, not inherently evil, but operating on a primal level of consumption and exchange, awakened and empowered by the villagers' desperate offerings. It was absorbing their hope, their desire, and reflecting it back as material gain, while subtly draining the village's collective spiritual essence, fostering greed and suspicion to further break down communal bonds, making individual anxieties easier to feed upon. Xiao Bao was right; the smile was a leer, the blessing a curse in disguise.
As Xuanzhen stood there, meditating on the imbalance, he felt the entity react to his presence, his probing awareness. The whispers began – not audible sound, but psychic suggestions brushing against his mind: promises of knowledge, hints of buried treasure nearby, temptations tailored to scholarly curiosity and the desire for power. It sought to ensnare him as it had the villagers, offering bait in exchange for his qi, his focus.
Xuanzhen remained centered, reciting grounding mantras, shielding himself. He recognized the parasitic pattern. This entity didn't offer true creation, only redistribution and consumption, granting fleeting material gain by draining deeper, more essential resources. The village wasn't becoming richer; it was becoming spiritually bankrupt.
He returned to the village and spoke plainly with Elder Peng and Widow Fen, explaining his findings. He described the parasitic nature of the 'blessing', how the shrine spirit was feeding on their collective vitality and harmony in exchange for the material windfalls.
Elder Peng was initially aghast, defensive. "But the harvests! The gold! It saved us!"
"It offered sustenance for the body while starving the spirit," Xuanzhen countered gently but firmly. "Look around you, Elder. Is Gan Quan truly healthier now? Or merely richer, and more afraid? True prosperity nourishes both body and soul, strengthens community, fosters generosity. This fortune breeds suspicion and drains the heart."
Widow Fen nodded sadly. "It is true. We have more grain, but less kindness. Xiao Bao feels the sickness in the air."
Convincing the other villagers was harder. Many clung fiercely to their newfound prosperity, unwilling to believe it came at a cost, dismissing Xuanzhen's words as interference or jealousy. But the lingering unease, the shared anxieties, the undeniable changes in communal feeling, gave Xuanzhen's words purchase. He spoke not of demanding they abandon their gains, but of restoring balance, of cleansing the shrine's influence, and finding a path to sustainable well-being rooted in community and genuine effort, not parasitic luck.
The ritual Xuanzhen proposed was one of severance and purification, requiring the villagers' collective participation to withdraw the energy they had inadvertently fed the entity. He asked them to gather not lavish offerings, but symbols of their own labour and community: seeds they had saved themselves (not from the miraculous harvest), water drawn from the struggling central well, threads spun and dyed by village hands, and simple clay bowls crafted locally.
At sunrise, Xuanzhen led the villagers, hesitant but mostly willing, back up to the shrine. The air felt heavy, resistant. He had them arrange their simple offerings around the Smiling Stone, not as appeasement, but as symbols of reclaiming their own energy, their own efforts. He guided them in a collective chant – not prayers to the stone, but affirmations of their own strength, their community bonds, their connection to the natural cycles of hardship and honest labour. They poured the water from the central well onto the ground around the shrine, symbolically washing away the unnatural influence. They tied the homespun threads loosely around the gnarled plum trees, representing the re-weaving of community ties.
Xuanzhen himself focused on the stone. He didn't try to destroy it or banish the spirit violently. Instead, he performed a ritual of gentle severance. Using a brush dipped in water mixed with purifying salt and powdered quartz, he carefully traced calming and sealing characters onto the stone's surface, visualizing the parasitic connection dissolving, the spirit’s hunger being soothed, its influence contained, encouraged back into dormancy. He struck a small chime, its clear tone cutting through the heavy air, disrupting the entity's hold.
As the ritual concluded, the stone seemed to settle, the coldness emanating from it lessened. The cloying sweetness in the air faded, replaced by the clean scent of pine and damp earth. A sense of release, of pressure lifting, spread through the gathered villagers. They looked at each other, truly seeing their neighbours again, the hard edge of suspicion softening in their eyes.
The return to normalcy for Gan Quan was gradual. The Old Well's flow lessened slightly, returning to more natural levels. The next harvest, achieved through shared effort and normal rainfall, was sufficient but not miraculous. The strange windfalls ceased. Some villagers grumbled initially, missing the easy fortune. But as community spirit slowly mended, as generosity replaced suspicion, as the haunted look faded from their eyes and true warmth returned to their interactions, most understood.
Xuanzhen stayed for a time, helping them adjust, reinforcing the importance of balance, community, and reliance on natural cycles rather than unnatural fortune. He left Gan Quan a quieter, poorer, yet fundamentally healthier village, its inhabitants relearning the value of resilience and shared effort. The Smiling Stone still stood on its hill, but it seemed just a weathered stone again, its ambiguous smile holding the wisdom of silence, a reminder that true blessings nourish the spirit, while those that glitter with easy fortune often carry the heaviest, most corrosive price.