Chapter 1: The Quickening (Rewritten)
South of France. Late Summer.
I passed an electric pole with a paper flapping against it in the warm breeze.
Missing: Sanrod Bricada. 16 years old.
If you have seen him, contact 571-893-723.
I tore the notice off and stared at the picture. Green eyes, messy brown hair, a half-smile on a young, tired face.
It was me.
I laughed — not because it was funny, but because it was ridiculous. I had walked all the way to the south of France and still couldn’t outrun the shadow of who I was. But I wasn’t safe yet. No, not until I crossed the border and carried on with the plan.
I kept walking. Two hours later, just outside a small village, a squeaky old cart pulled up beside me. The driver was a pretty blonde girl, probably just a few years older than me. She looked at me, curious but not afraid.
"You look half-dead," she said. "Need a lift?"
"I wouldn't say no," I replied, tossing my worn-out bag into the back.
She gestured to the passenger bench. "Name?"
"Edward Bricknose," I lied with a smile.
She snorted. "Seriously?"
"Dead serious."
She gave me a side glance. “Nately.”
“Where you headed, Nately?”
“To the coast, near Spain. Visiting family. Escaping family. It’s complicated.”
She talked a lot—about her parents, her ex, her dreams of living on a boat. I nodded, half-listening, half-dozing. When she asked where I was going, I gave her a made-up story about being a champion swimmer on my way to compete in the Olympics. Told her I was twenty-six. She believed me. The mustache probably helped.
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Eventually, she stopped the cart near a dusty cliffside overlooking a bay.
"This is as far as I go," she said.
I thanked her and jumped down. In two more days, I reached the sea. Thirty-four boats lay moored in the bay. My eyes fell on one — a sleek blue schooner named Ecstasy. She was beautiful. Double-masted, wooden, about thirty meters long. And she looked abandoned.
I dropped my bag and leather coat on the sand and swam out to her. The water was cold and clear. There was no easy way up — only a rope ladder too high to reach from the water.
So I swam back to shore, found an old fishing boat with a small anchor, and lugged it through the waves to the schooner. It was just enough weight to hook myself up over the side. With effort, I pulled myself onto the deck. The boat creaked gently beneath me. She was in perfect shape — smooth wooden floors, polished rails, no leaks. Below deck, I found a simple engine, which I quickly dismantled and tossed overboard. I wouldn’t need it. I was going to sail her old-school.
She had twelve bunks, a full galley, two jibs, a mainsail. I could feel it: this boat was built for speed.
I swam back for my gear, bundled it above my head, and climbed aboard. I stayed low, hoping no one had seen me. But even if they had — in less than an hour, I’d be gone.
I needed supplies.
The small town nearby had a general store and a police station. I found a sturdy wooden club first — just in case. Then I walked into the store.
“Excuse me, where’s the police station?”
The storekeeper pointed left. "Four minutes that way. You can’t miss it. You just visiting?"
“Actually,” I said, grinning, “I’m here to rob you.”
He blinked. I pulled the club out and knocked him unconscious with a single swing.
I grabbed a basket, threw in canned food, dried goods, bottled water, anything that looked useful. Then I ran outside and waited by an alley near the police station.
Within minutes, the storekeeper came stumbling in. A few officers ran past me in a panic toward the shop.
I slipped inside the police station behind them, club at the ready. I took one officer down before he even turned around, grabbed his gun, found another in a drawer. Ammunition taped underneath. Smart, but not smart enough.
I walked out, collected my stolen goods, and made my way to the shore.
There was a fisherman preparing to row out.
“Mind if I join you?” I asked.
“Where to?”
"Just out in the bay. That blue schooner over there — beautiful, isn’t she?"
He shrugged. “Sure. But we don’t touch anything, alright?”
“Scout’s honor,” I lied again.
Halfway there, I pointed overboard. “Hey, what’s that in the water?”
He leaned over.
I shoved him hard.
He splashed into the sea, sputtering curses.
I grabbed my basket, climbed up, cut his boat loose, and released Ecstasy from her mooring.
As I sailed away, he floated behind, yelling obscenities and threats.
I set the sails with shaking hands.
Free at last