Heya my elf friends.
I’m alive! Sort of.
Sum of things: Moved, learned a few concerning medical news, wasn’t in a good headspace for a while.
Now, I look at the story and I see things I really don’t like.
What I like:
Yuki. I like her character and persona. She’s fun, silly and overall a good bunny.
Jenny. I like her as well, even if her personality didn’t come the same I wanted when I started the story.
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What I don’t like:
Language barrier: That sucked way more than I wanted to admit.
The system rules: They suck. Really. It might be good for a tabletop rpg game, but I clearly failed to translate that into interesting writing.
Stuff after Jenny leaves the manor: The original plot called for Jenny getting captured, and Yuki braving the human town to save her “pet”. Well, I was “struck” by a moment of “inspiration” dumbness and changed the whole thing: added a dungeon that wasn’t supposed to be found at the time, discarded the whole “skypirate” plot-line with Jenny and Yuki fleeing the island.
I even had images for the pirates!
Anyhow, that’s to say, I’ve been tying to get finish book one of this story and it’s just can’t continue writing. I do want to finish it, however. Give it about a month and I’ll revise the first 20 something chapters post a new story.
Thank you all for reading.