The companions broke camp with their now-practiced efficiency. As Lorien scouted ahead, conducting his usual morning patrol of the area, his keen eyes, accustomed to deciphering the subtle language of the forest, spotted something amiss. Partially concealed by the dense undergrowth were the distinct impressions of carriage wheels, deeply gouged into the soft earth. Alongside them, a series of smaller, hurried tracks indicated the passage of several individuals – survivors, perhaps, of some unfortunate incident. He signaled to the others, his expression grim. The relative peace of their journey was about to be disturbed.
Lorien quickly relayed his findings. "Carriage tracks, deep-set, likely laden," he reported, his voice low and serious. "And footprints, several sets, moving hastily eastward. Some are small, possibly children."
A brief but intense discussion erupted amongst the group. The path to Arbor was their intended route, a journey to relative safety and potential answers for Dave. But the tracks painted a grim picture, an unspoken plea for help.
"Arbor can wait," Borin rumbled, his hand instinctively going to the handle of his axe. "If there's folk in trouble, especially wee ones, we can't just walk away."
Elara nodded, her usual serenity tinged with concern. "The Twilight Lands are unforgiving. To abandon those in distress is not our way. The Queen's peace extends to all within her realm, and that includes ensuring their safety where we can."
Dave, still very much the newcomer, looked from one determined face to another. His own inclination was to avoid trouble, a deeply ingrained habit from a lifetime of misfortune. But seeing the resolve in his companions' eyes, and remembering their kindness to him, swayed him. Plus, the thought of "rescuing survivors" had a certain heroic ring to it, even if he felt distinctly unheroic. "If you guys think it's what we should do, I'm with you," he said, trying to inject more confidence into his voice than he felt. His health and magic bars in the corner of his vision felt like a small, personal reassurance.
Lorien, having already come to the same conclusion, gave a curt nod. "The tracks are fresh, no more than a day old. We should be able to make good time."
With a shared sense of purpose, they altered their course, Lorien now leading them eastward, his focus entirely on the trail. The journey was tense, the silence of the forest punctuated only by the sounds of their passage and the occasional, distant cry of an unfamiliar creature.
After several hours of pushing through dense thickets and navigating uneven terrain, the forest began to thin. Ahead, through a break in the trees, they could see the tell-tale signs of a settlement – a faint wisp of smoke, the suggestion of rooftops. As they drew closer, however, the atmosphere grew heavy, an unsettling stillness replacing the natural sounds of the woods.
They came upon a small village nestled in a shallow valley. It was, or had been, a quaint collection of timber and thatch buildings. Now, it bore the unmistakable scars of recent violence. Doors hung splintered from their hinges, overturned carts lay abandoned in the muddy track that served as a main street, and a chilling silence hung over the place. The acrid smell of smoke still lingered, not from hearth fires, but from something recently and violently extinguished. It was clear some terrible action had taken place the night before.
As Dave took in the scene, he began to notice details that went beyond the immediate devastation. The timber of the cottages wasn’t just crudely hewn; many of the beams seemed to flow with the natural grain of the wood in unusually graceful curves, almost as if they had been coaxed into shape rather than forced. Here and there, patches of moss growing on the thatched roofs pulsed with a faint, rhythmic bioluminescence, like slow, green heartbeats – a stark contrast to the damage elsewhere. Some of the window boxes, though now trampled, still held flowers with petals that shimmered with an inner light, their colors subtly shifting in the gloom.
The air itself, beneath the scent of smoke and fear, carried a faint, sweet aroma, similar to the one he’d noticed near the Sun-Sparrow, a hint of ozone and blooming night-flowers. He saw a well in what might have been the village square; the stones around its edge were worn smooth, and tiny, almost imperceptible runes were carved into them, glowing faintly with a soft blue light when he focused his attention, similar to the interface of his 'system'. Even some of the discarded everyday objects – a fallen water pail, a dropped spindle – seemed to have a certain elegance to their design, crafted from woods with unusual grains or inlaid with small, polished stones that seemed to catch the light in odd ways.
It wasn't overt, flashy magic, not like Elara's healing light or his own chaotic fireballs. This was quieter, woven into the fabric of the village itself, a gentle symbiosis between the people and the inherent magic of the Twilight Lands. It was as if the forest itself had a hand in shaping the village, lending its subtle enchantments to their homes and lives. For Dave, it was another layer of the alien and the wondrous, a glimpse into a world where magic wasn't just a tool for dramatic effect, but a quiet, constant presence, an early, rustic sign of the deeper enchantments that might await in a place like Arbor.
Cautiously, the four companions entered the village. A few villagers, their faces etched with fear and grief, emerged hesitantly from their battered homes. They were a mix of humans and a few individuals with features that suggested a touch of fey ancestry – slightly pointed ears, eyes of unusual, jewel-like colors that seemed to catch the faint light, and a certain delicate grace even in their distress.
An elderly man, his face a roadmap of wrinkles and sorrow, stepped forward, leaning heavily on a wooden staff that seemed to thrum with a barely perceptible energy, its gnarled wood shaped into intricate, flowing patterns. He appeared to be the village elder. "Strangers," he said, his voice raspy but firm, "what brings you to our afflicted homes?"
Elara stepped forward, her presence radiating a calm authority. "We are envoys of Queen Lyra," she said, her voice gentle but clear. "We came upon signs of trouble in the woods and followed the tracks here. What has happened?"
The elder’s shoulders sagged. "Marauders," he choked out. He gestured to a younger woman, Serana, whose eyes, though tear-filled, held a spark of defiance. "Serana, child, tell them what you saw."
Serana stepped forward, her voice trembling. "There were at least a dozen. Humans, all of them, clad in dark, ragged leather and piecemeal metal armor. They were rough, brutal. Their leader was a large man, heavily scarred, and he carried a great, two-handed axe with a jagged blade." She paused, shuddering. "They... they wore a symbol. A crude, black-painted serpent, coiled around a broken spear, on their shields and some of their shoulder guards."
At the mention of the symbol, Lorien’s head snapped up. His usually composed features tightened, a flicker of grim recognition in his eyes. Elara, noticing his reaction, glanced at him sharply.
Serana continued, unaware of the significance the symbol held for the elf. "They went that way," she pointed towards a trampled path leading out of the village, "dragging Elmsworth the baker and his little girl, Pippa."
"They took our winter stores," another villager added. "And the few healing poultices Old Hana had prepared. They smashed the Luminous Stones that light our pathways." He gestured to a shattered, once-glowing crystal by a nearby cottage, its inner light now extinguished.
Borin spat on the ground. "Human trash. That symbol means something to you, Lorien?" he asked, looking at Lorien.
Lorien nodded slowly, his gaze distant for a moment. "The Coiled Serpent Bandits," he said, his voice tight. "A particularly vicious group known in the borderlands further south. They raid, they pillage and they are rarely seen this far north, this close to Aeridor's heart. They are ruthless, but they are men, not shadow creatures." He looked at Elara. "For them to be here is concerning."
Elara absorbed this, her expression hardening. "If the Coiled Serpents are operating this boldly, it speaks of a worrying shift in the region's stability." She turned back to the elder. "Rest assured, we will do everything in our power to bring your people back and see these fiends punished. We are servants of Queen Lyra of Aeridor, ruler of these lands. We assure you, we will hunt down those responsible for this outrage. We will deliver justice in her name."
A murmur of hope rippled through the small crowd. Lorien, his face set in a grim mask, was already examining the tracks Serana had indicated. The symbol had changed things; this wasn't just a random act of violence.
"We'll need to move quickly," Lorien stated, his voice now edged with a cold anger. "The Coiled Serpents are cunning, but their greed often makes them careless. We have a name to their villainy now."
After a few more minutes of gathering what information they could, the four companions prepared to depart. The villagers watched them with a mixture of hope and trepidation.
"Right then," Borin grunted, adjusting the fit of his axe on his shoulder. "Let's go uncoil these serpents."
Lorien took the lead, moving with a focused intensity that was even more pronounced than before. Elara walked beside Dave, her expression thoughtful and stern.
"What do you make of it, Dave?" she asked quietly as they left the sorrowful silence of the village behind. "Known bandits, far from their usual grounds."
Dave shook his head. "Sounds like they're getting bold. Or desperate." He gripped his stick. "Good thing we know who we're looking for now. Makes them feel a little less like random monsters and more like… well, like bad guys with a brand name." 'The Coiled Serpent Bandits,' he thought, a smirk playing on his lips as he trudged along. Sounds like a terrible thrash metal band. Probably open for GWAR back on Earth. 'Coiled Serpent Bandits,' playing all their non-hits like 'Pillage the Village Idiot' and 'My Other Axe is a Slightly Bigger Axe.' At least it's a step up from being accosted by opera-singing mosquitoes. He glanced at his ever-present health and magic bars. Wonder if their merch is any good. Probably just poorly tanned leather and broken spears. Hard pass. He supposed this was progress. Instead of his car being swallowed by a random sinkhole, he was now actively hunting down marauders with a magical stick and a group of fantasy archetypes. His life was officially a low-budget RPG, and he wasn't even sure he was the main character. Still, it beat flipping burgers in a medieval-themed grease trap. Probably.
The forest path ahead was rougher, leading into steeper, rockier terrain. The hunt for the Coiled Serpent bandits had begun.
They pushed eastward, deeper into the rugged hill country that lay beyond the tranquil, subtly magical valley of the besieged village. Lorien, now truly in his element, moved with a predatory grace, his keen elven eyes deciphering the story left in the mud and crushed foliage. The Coiled Serpent Bandits, true to their reputation for brutality over brains, or perhaps simply arrogant in their perceived remoteness, had made little effort to conceal their passage.
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"They're careless," Lorien murmured, kneeling to examine a particularly clear set of boot prints beside a snapped sapling. "Confident. Or foolish. Heavy packs, shoddy discipline. They're not expecting pursuit, or they simply don't care." He indicated a discarded wineskin lying nearby, its contents likely long gone. "And they're not conserving their energy."
Borin grunted, kicking disdainfully at a discarded piece of torn cloth snagged on a thorny bush – it bore the faint, smeared image of their coiled serpent emblem. "Typical. All bluster and no finesse. Means they'll hit hard when cornered, but tire easily if we press them."
Elara walked with a quiet intensity, her gaze sweeping the surrounding woods, alert for any signs of ambush, though the trail itself was almost laughably obvious. She occasionally glanced at Dave, who was doing his best to keep up with their more practiced pace, his stick held at the ready.
Well, this is convenient, Dave thought, trying not to trip over a gnarled root. Our 'metal band' of marauders apparently couldn't cover their tracks if their lives depended on it. It's like they're leaving a breadcrumb trail of incompetence. Or maybe stale bread. Definitely seems like their style. He eyed a particularly large, muddy footprint. Big dude, that leader. Probably compensating for something. Like a distinct lack of subtlety in his banditry.
The terrain grew more challenging as the day wore on. They navigated narrow ravines, scrambled over loose scree, and pushed through thickets of thorny vines that seemed to snag at their clothes with malicious intent. The subtle, life-affirming magic of the gentler parts of the Twilight Lands felt distant here; the woods were darker, the trees more gnarled and twisted, and the silence was broken only by the cawing of unseen birds that sounded suspiciously judgmental.
Yet, Lorien never faltered. He pointed out broken twigs, scuff marks on rocks, and the faint but continuous depression in the undergrowth that marked the bandits' passage. The trail was a clear scar upon the landscape, leading them ever onward.
A few more hours passed in this grim pursuit. The sun, now past its zenith, cast long, slanted shadows through the trees, making the already dim forest feel more oppressive. The air grew heavy and still. Lorien, who had been pushing the pace, suddenly held up a hand, bringing the group to an abrupt halt.
"Smoke," he said, his voice barely a whisper, his nostrils flared. "And recently doused fire."
They advanced with renewed caution, Elara and Borin fanning out slightly, weapons at the ready. Dave stayed close to Elara, his own stick held tight, his heart thumping a nervous rhythm against his ribs. He could smell it now too – the acrid scent of a hastily smothered fire.
Ahead, in a small, sheltered clearing, they found the bandits' campsite. It was crude and messy. Remnants of a poorly cooked meal lay scattered around a still-smoldering fire pit that had been hastily covered with dirt and leaves. Empty wineskins and discarded food scraps littered the ground. Lorien began to meticulously examine the area near the fire, while Elara scanned the periphery.
Dave, trying to be observant but also acutely aware of every protruding root and uneven patch of ground, took a tentative step towards a pile of refuse, thinking he might spot something the others had missed. As usual, his luck had other plans. His foot caught on a half-buried piece of discarded tack, and he stumbled forward with a yelp, arms flailing, landing heavily on his hands and knees right beside the refuse pile.
"Clumsy oaf," he muttered under his breath, annoyed at himself. He pushed himself up, shaking his head, and then froze. His gaze had fallen on something nestled amongst the filth, something that made the blood drain from his face. Lying there, partially obscured by a tattered piece of burlap, was an elven hand. Severed. It was slender, with long, graceful fingers, now tragically still. Dirt was ingrained beneath its delicately shaped fingernails, and a simple, woven bracelet, made of colorful threads like the ones he’d seen some of the elven village children wearing, still clung to the wrist. Dave stared, his breath catching in his throat, his eyes locked on the small, lifeless hand and the vibrant, innocent bracelet.
The world seemed to tilt. His earlier, detached sarcasm, his comparisons to video games – it all shattered, replaced by a raw, visceral horror. This wasn't a prop. This wasn't a special effect. This was… real. He felt a wave of nausea so intense he thought he might be sick.
"Dave? Are you alright?" Elara's voice, laced with concern, cut through his shock. She and Lorien had turned at the sound of his fall and were now approaching. Borin was right behind them.
Dave couldn't speak. He could only point, his hand trembling, towards the refuse pile.
Elara followed his gaze, and then she gasped, her hand flying to her mouth, her eyes wide with dawning horror. Lorien’s face became a mask of cold fury. Borin let out a string of guttural Dwarven curses, his knuckles white around the haft of his axe.
"Pippa" Elara whispered, her voice choked with emotion, tears welling in her eyes as she recognized the bracelet. "The baker’s daughter." The fact it was an elven child, one of her own distant kin by race, seemed to deepen the wound.
Borin’s face was thunderous. "The bloody animals!" he roared, his voice cracking with rage. He slammed his axe into a nearby tree trunk, the metal biting deep into the wood.
Lorien knelt, his expression unreadable but for the icy fire in his eyes. He gently reached out, his fingers brushing the piece of burlap aside to fully reveal the tragic sight, before carefully covering the hand with a piece of clean cloth he produced from his pack. "They will pay for this," he said, his voice flat and deadly. "They will pay for every horror they have inflicted upon the Elvenfolk and any other."
As Lorien spoke, Elara, though her face was pale with grief and fury, seemed to steel herself. Her mind, honed by years of study and the practical necessities of life in the Twilight Lands, raced. The hand, it was a clean cut, and the flesh, though marred, didn't look overly decayed. There was a chance, a slim, desperate chance.
"Quickly," she commanded, her voice regaining a measure of its authority, though it trembled slightly. She knelt beside Lorien, her hands already glowing with a faint, silvery-blue light. "It's recent. If we preserve it."
She focused her will, and the silvery-blue light intensified, coalescing around Pippa's severed hand. A sudden chill filled the air around them. Frost, delicate and crystalline, spread rapidly over the small hand, encasing it in a thin, shimmering layer of ice. It wasn't a harsh, jagged freezing, but a gentle, almost reverent preservation, the magical ice perfectly contouring to the delicate shape.
"The cold should slow any further degradation," Elara murmured, more to herself than the others, her breath misting in the suddenly frigid pocket of air. She carefully took the cloth Lorien had produced and, with utmost tenderness, wrapped the ice-encased hand. The package was small, tragically so.
She looked up at Borin, her eyes pleading. "Borin, please. Can you keep this safe in your pack? It must be kept cool, away from direct warmth."
The dwarf, his rage momentarily tempered by Elara's swift action and the desperate hope it implied, nodded curtly. "Aye, lass. I'll see to it." He gently took the wrapped bundle from her and carefully stowed it deep within his sturdy pack, amongst his provisions where it would be best insulated.
Elara watched him, then took a shaky breath. "If we can reach them soon, if Pippa is alive…" Her voice trailed off, the unspoken hope of reattachment, of a miraculous healing, hanging heavy in the air. "If not… if we cannot help her ourselves, then I will take this to Arbor. The Healers of the Arbor, they possess knowledge far beyond my own. There might still be a way."
The grim discovery, now coupled with Elara's desperate act of preservation, solidified their resolve. The hunt for the Coiled Serpent Bandits had transformed from a mission of justice to a race against time, fueled by a sliver of hope against a backdrop of unimaginable cruelty.
There were no more discussions of caution, no more idle observations about the surrounding flora. Silence, thick and heavy, settled over the group, broken only by the rasp of their breathing and the crunch of their boots on the uneven trail. Lorien moved like a phantom at the head of their small procession, his elven senses stretched to their utmost limit. The bandits’ trail, still carelessly obvious, was now an affront, each broken twig and muddy footprint a fresh insult. His pace was relentless, driven by a cold, controlled fury that radiated from him in waves.
Elara followed, her staff held tight, its polished wood a stark contrast to the ice-encased, cloth-wrapped bundle Borin now carried with grim reverence. Her face was a study in contained grief and fierce determination. The hope of reattaching Pippa’s hand, of mending such a grievous wound, was a fragile ember she shielded within her, fueling an almost desperate urgency. Her earlier scientific curiosity was gone, replaced by the focused resolve of a healer racing against mortality itself.
Borin, for his part, was a thundercloud of barely suppressed rage. His earlier grumbling about "human trash" had given way to a stony silence, his knuckles white where he gripped his axe. Each step he took seemed to shake the ground, his heavy tread a promise of the retribution he intended to deliver. He kept a close watch on their surroundings, but his eyes often strayed to the pack where Pippa’s hand lay, a grim reminder of the stakes.
Dave trudged behind them, the image of the small, severed elven hand seared into his mind. His earlier flippancy had vanished, leaving a hollow ache and a simmering anger. He gripped his stick, not as a curious magical artifact, but as the only weapon he had. Except for his fireballs of course.
They had been pushing on for another hour, the terrain becoming even more broken and tangled, when Lorien, without breaking stride, made a minute gesture with his hand. It wasn’t a signal to stop, but to be aware. His gaze flickered to a dense copse of thorny bushes a dozen yards off the main, messy trail the bandits had bulldozed.
He veered slightly, moving with an unnerving silence towards the thicket. The others followed, their senses on high alert. Lorien parted the branches, and the group recoiled.
Lying sprawled in the dirt, partially concealed, was the body of a man. He was human. Crude iron chains, a type Dave had only ever seen in movies about ancient, barbaric times, were still locked around one wrist and his neck, the latter having clearly chafed the skin raw. His clothes were torn rags, revealing emaciated limbs and the clear, horrifying patterns of whip marks across his back and shoulders – old scars layered with fresh, bleeding welts. His eyes were open, staring blankly at the oppressive canopy above. He looked like he had simply collapsed from exhaustion and his wounds, and the bandits hadn't even bothered to unchain him before tossing him aside like so much refuse.
Dave stared, a fresh wave of horror washing over him, colder and sicker than before. "Slaves?" he breathed, the word tasting like ash in his mouth. "They have slaves here?" He’d encountered monsters, magic, and interdimensional travel, but the concept of human beings owning other human beings in this vibrant, albeit dangerous, new world struck him with a particular kind of revulsion. He’d known, abstractly, that Earth’s history was full of such horrors, but to see it manifest here, in this beautiful, terrible place, it was appalling. Any remaining vestige of detachment, any lingering notion that this was some kind of bizarre adventure, evaporated. This wasn't just a fight against "bad guys"; it was a fight against a profound evil. His resolve, already hardened by Pippa’s fate, solidified into something akin to cold iron.
Elara knelt beside the body, her expression one of deep sorrow and quiet fury. "From the borderlands, by his attire and the make of those chains," she said softly, her voice tight with controlled anger. "The Coiled Serpents have long been rumored to deal in such misery. It seems their depravity knows no bounds."
Borin let out a low growl that seemed to vibrate in Dave’s chest. "To treat anyone so, it’s an offense to the very mountains," he said, his hand clenching and unclenching on his axe. "They defile everything they touch."
Lorien’s examination was brief and grim. "He died not long ago. Exhaustion, his wounds, they ran him into the ground and left him. This one," he indicated the man’s likely origin, "was a captive long before they reached the elven village."
The discovery painted an even bleaker picture of their quarry. The Coiled Serpent Bandits weren't just raiding for supplies and causing mayhem; they were actively involved in slave trading, a brutal enterprise that spoke of a deeply ingrained cruelty. The fate of Elmsworth and young Pippa, if they were still alive, seemed even more perilous.
Dave looked away from the tragic figure, his jaw tight. The image of the chains, the whip marks, the sheer, callous disregard for a life, would be burned into his memory. His earlier thoughts about the bandits sounding like a metal band now felt disgustingly trivial. These weren't cartoon villains. They were monsters in human skin.
"We find them," Dave said, his voice low and surprisingly steady, a cold anger giving it an unfamiliar weight. "And we make them pay."
Lorien met his gaze, a flicker of grim acknowledgment in his elven eyes. Elara nodded, her face set. Borin simply hefted his axe, the movement speaking volumes.
After a moment of silence, Lorien carefully closed the man's eyes. They couldn't give him a proper burial, not now, not with the bandits still ahead and captives to save. But the sight of his suffering, his undignified end, added fuel to the fire of their pursuit. They left him to the silence of the forest, a tragic marker on a trail of cruelty, and pushed onward with a new, even more desperate determination.