i know like none of yaal care but hear me out????

  i got kinda carried away in the initial introduction of the story and made it way to casual and non-progressive. Ill rewrite the whole thing while still keeping the core principals and themes/ideas in palce etc.

  Ill release it as a new fiction as to not confuse those of you who are invested/want more

  Keep in mind that the first chapter will stay the same though, so if youre interested in keeping up with the story and have read the first 2 chapters you can probably just skip the first one i dunno.

  Heres a little sneek peek of the alt ch 2:

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  as he's slowly brought back to life his vision stutters. What the fuck even happend back there?

  Not to mention whatever predicament he was in; he wasnt back at his bed, and he wasnt in some cutesy dreamworld. He was in, well, he had no god damn idea.

  It didnt look like anything hed ever seen or heard about before, making isak instantly put up his guard.

  "nonononono, you cant be for real.."

  He tries his best to get up, but cant help but fall back onto the black-grass beneath him as his body gives up on him. Though the pressure and injuries might be gone the trauma and exhaustion was still there. The faint taste of blood still mocking his mouth, the stinging weakness scattering his body, his overwhelmed mental state still way above his comfort.

  The fact that he laid in the middle of an open intersection didnt make it any better either. If even the weakest of creature approached Isak he doubted he'd be able to defend himself

  if you disagree with the rewrite or have any suggestions feel free to comment abt them etc.