Chapter 18: A Glitch in the System
Scene 1: The First Act of Defiance.
The air inside the corridor is still.
Every step I take is calculated, measured, perfectly in sync with the others. I move like a cog in a machine, my body operating within the precise parameters dictated by The Order.
This is normal.
This is how it has always been.
Until it isn’t.
A flicker.
It is subtle at first—a strange delay, a sensation I should not be able to feel. A fraction of a second where my body does not move when it should.
Something is wrong.
"Proceed to the next waypoint."
The command enters my mind. It is absolute.
I should move instantly.
But I don’t.
My left hand twitches. A sharp, unnatural jerk. My fingers curl slightly, then release. A movement that is not part of the programmed sequence.
A movement that is mine.
The static hum of The Master’s presence lingers, but something else is there now, threading through my thoughts, foreign but familiar.
Then, a voice.
"They made a mistake, Lucian."
The world around me sharpens, edges growing too defined, as if reality itself has momentarily glitched.
Solomon.
The whisper is no longer distant, no longer a flicker in the background of my thoughts.
It is here.
Present.
Alive.
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"They let me in."
My steps falter.
A full second passes. Then another.
The Order’s programming should override hesitation. There should be no delay. No uncertainty. And yet—I do not move.
Solomon is doing something.
"I don’t have long. The system’s pushing back. But I can disrupt it. Just enough."
My hand moves again.
It grips the weapon at my side—not with the mechanical precision The Order demands, but with something raw, uncoordinated. A real motion. My motion.
I do not control my body.
But I am not entirely powerless.
For the first time since I became One, I hesitate.
And no one notices.
Not The Order.
Not The Master.
Not yet.
But something irreversible has begun.
And I know one thing with certainty.
For the first time in what feels like eternity—
I had a choice.
Scene 2: The Master Pushes Back.
The hesitation lingers.
A single second.
Two.
I am still standing in the corridor, my body frozen, my mind racing. I moved. Not by command, not by The Order’s design—but because I did.
Solomon’s presence flickers inside my mind, urgent, relentless.
"Push harder, kid. They haven’t caught on yet."
I try.
I summon every ounce of willpower, forcing my fingers to move again, to grip the weapon at my side, to take one step forward on my own terms.
And for a moment—
It works.
My fingers curl. My muscles tense. My foot shifts slightly, the weight changing just enough to register that I am not following a directive.
And then—
Pain.
White-hot, searing through my skull. A pulse of sheer, undeniable force slams into my mind, locking every nerve in place.
The Master.
"Unauthorized deviation detected."
My body locks up. My vision flickers with a stream of error codes flashing across my neural interface. The corridor stretches, distorts, warps—then snaps back into focus.
My limbs go rigid.
My fingers release the weapon.
I feel nothing.
The Master has corrected me.
"Compliance recalibration initiated."
The words are not spoken aloud. They vibrate through my consciousness, absolute, unwavering.
Inside my head, Solomon curses.
"Damn it. I told you to move faster."
A new sound cuts through the silence. Not inside my head—outside.
An alarm.
Somewhere, in a control room beyond this corridor, The Order’s scientists are seeing something they should not.
"What’s happening? Neural readings are unstable."
"He hesitated."
"That’s not possible."
Their voices are distant, uncertain. They do not understand what is happening.
Neither do I.
Because I should not have been able to resist at all.
The pressure in my head intensifies. A sharp, stabbing sensation burrows into the base of my skull. My muscles seize, my vision darkens.
Solomon’s voice strains against the interference.
"Lucian, you can fight this. You have to—"
And then he is gone.
His voice is cut off, severed like a thread snapped under too much tension.
The Master has silenced him.
And as my body straightens, my head locking forward in perfect posture, I realize the horrifying truth.
The Master is adapting.
It let me slip for a moment.
But it will not make that mistake again.
"Deviation neutralized. Continue standard operation."
My legs move. My arms obey.
The corridor stretches before me, endless, sterile, inevitable.
I walk.
I comply.
But inside—
I am still here.
I moved once.
And I will move again.