Hello guys/girls.

  I'm the author (obviously) *eye roll*

  Here is the deal guys. If you want a good story from a guy who doesn't have a lot of experience.

  1. I need opinions and suggestions on how to make it easy to read, so better way to say the same thing. I'm sure in chapter 2 you noticed the door explaining. That's a point even I don't like.(am I the only one?)

  The narrative has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident.

  2. Spell suggestions are welcome.

  3. Read number 1 again.

  4. Read number 2 again.

  5. How would you like to see the status of Halo and others?

  That is about it. If you don't have any ideas hope you enjoy future chapters!

  Oh! Reviews would be nice if you're not giving me 4 stars or below...