Thanks for the support, now today let’s talk something shall we? Let’s talk about how I created the webnovel that has its sitcom style and everything, first let me introduce
Coin Rush is a webnovel created by me, it follows the quirky adventures of Cheesy and his gang at Hotel Pizza, his brother voice-of-reason Cheeseburger, his dumbass sidekick Mr. Corn Fkes Boy, the beer-loving reckless offensive guy Firesyer, the fashion-loving Tiffany, the sarcastic tsundere cold sister Rita, and the kind loving voice-of-reason Creamsweet
Other characters include Jess (Cheeseburger’s wife) Jimmy (Cheeseburger and Jess’s troublesome childish niece) Professor Kick My Golick Balls, the evil scientist, Adam Diagonal (the gangster perverted monkey) and Tame-do the Lame-do (The perverted neighbor at Hotel Pizza)
The bossy clock Mr. Tick-a-clock, The shark Bruce, Cheesy and Cheeseburger’s strict no-nonsense mean cold violent father Mayor Sugarface.
The Last But not the least Father Michael, Hotel Pizza’s Priest who has a catholic church, sometimes a bad priest.
Go to my @Da3rdGreatKing and read the episodes, if you love them, comment on my conversation page, follow me, and vote if you want!
Check the reddit and DeviantArt page to see my art, and stuff for the show.
Now here we go…
The story all begins in my childhood years, yes, those sweet good times…those times where you would eat fruits, py and start watching TV, you see, I love watching TV, I love cartoons, I love animation, I love comedy, I love drama and romance, and witty stuff
But what did I like the most?
Adult Animation and Disney and Warner Bros
I love those, I love adult animation, to this date Family Guy and the Simpsons are my favorite shows, and let’s not forget, I love Futurama and American Dad!
I also love Disney, Disney has the best movies, I go to the cinemas, what I love most about them is their Broadway songs. E.G Encanto and Toy Story are personal favorites.
Now, the love I had for television made me someone, so at an early age, I started writing, of course, if you see my stories when I was 8 and 11, you would say ‘’You’re such a bad author!’’ Of course, they sucked.
But for the truth, I love writing and craft, the reason I’m on these websites is because I want to share with you my love, my skills, the worlds I build, they are amazing obviously.
I also love reading books, books are very nice, Science Fiction and Teen fiction, I guess.
I’m a fan of comics and manuscripts to be honest.
I also was at school, and was good at English Stories, right now I can make a huge story, very simple, and kind-of-short.
Let me tell you something, you can say you want to be a doctor, a nurse, an engineer, an accountant, a builder, a boxer, a football pyer, and all sorts, but for the truth, do you know how to be them? If you know then do it, but it needs practice.
Follow your passion and your journey, follow what you’ve been doing all these years, follow what you are good at, if you have a nice skill then do it, even the smallest things you have, pursuer them, and of course, it starts small, not big.
Don’t just get fish for a person, teach that guy to catch the fish, don’t copy stuff, teach yourself how they made them, watch development of your favorite stuff, the ones who are successful, the users, they all began like you/us, we were just sitting here, writing stuff, getting no views, 123, 6, 5,
But if we try hard and make fresh books, we can make it good.
New concepts don’t always work, but keep trying HARD and HARD, you will get them.
If you have a bad day at school, come back home, and start scrolling on your phone in the bedroom, what is there? Instead deal with your anger, do what you love, read your favorite stories, do a lot of things.
Believe me or not, everything I’m saying is what made me turn Coin Rush into 6 years of development, scroll to the next chapter.
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Now time to talk about Coin Rush:
Development on the webcomic began in 2019, when at that time, I wanted to be a nice filmmaker, a nice writer, and make industry wide success.
Little did I know that big things begin small.
So, I had the idea of a Stair Dismount cartoon, Mr. Ego is the dumb leader, Mr. Dismount…well is like Cheeseburger, voice-of-reason, and also the green android bot I forgot was supposed to be like Mr. Corn Fkes Boy, dumbass.
The pn continued and I went to Tiffany, just like the bot but pink.
However, designing issues prevented this from happening, I had trouble, I was a very bad drawer at the time, and yeah, I was.
So, I changed the concept to Stickmen, yeah seems fun? Of course, it seems fun, Cheesy would have been a yellow stickman, yes, he would have.
I’m going too far, let me continue where I was at:
So yes, after I had a love for pying video games. E.g. Angry Birds, Super Mario, Sonic, GTA
I made it into a game, they were in my head, a rolling pizza on the slide, shooting pizza-bombs everywhere, enemies would have been roaches, bh-bh
In fact, I wanted to release it on Xbox and PyStation 5, I even had the graphics imitations.
Silly me.
And yes, I never even knew how to python, do game design, and make the music. Only reason I know about this I read a lot of Wikipedia articles, and go on Development.
After some time, the series evolved into an animated TV Show, I had ideas, and started discussing with my brother, in 2023, I started discovering PowerPoint, so then I learnt about drawing and these amazing animations, I learnt them from Angry Birds Custom animations I was seeing in YouTube.
I began doing lots of experimental stuff, and I started becoming good, every single day, then I learnt about 3D designs, I made presets and lighting, I can even show you how to make a model using 3D, but I’m not on YouTube (FOR NOW)
And yes, I made the characters.
Starting with Cheesy.
Cheesy was just a guy in my head, I made his pizza body, and then designed his eyes, and made the pepperoni, I then made his Crown (Cheesy isn’t a king, it’s his selfish personality that makes him think he is)
And then Cheeseburger, he is the hardest!
And Firesyer, Tiffany, Rita and Creamsweet, Quack-O-Evil and the roaches.
Tiffany’s design evolved a lot, she was a roller skater girl, but changed, it wasn’t too fun, I changed her to be hairy, and neckcy, and failure, punk: failure
I had failures, until at the st minute, I redesigned her to something cute and teenish.
Rita was just manga.
Mr. Corn Fkes Boy, if you are wondering, I had lots of pns, either I had to put him or not, I had lots of ideas, until I just put him, Cheesy and him make a pretty good duo.
His dumbass personality was inspired by Patrick, Mario (SMG4), and many dumb guys you can think of.
Cheesy was inspired from Stan Smith and SpongeBob, and Homer, and Peter.
His personality is a mix of recklessness and selfishness, anything you would expect out of your younger brother who has a business.
‘’PIZZA PENIS!’’
Cheesy’s catchphrase.
And Cheeseburger was supposed to be different, but he is a voice-of-reason brother who is married to Jess. He is cool, sometimes pridy, but intelligent and controls Cheesy’s nonsense, like Creamsweet.
And also, Tiffany was inspired by fashion-loving teenage girls, they are common in sitcoms, so I just use them.
Her design changed during production, from roller skater girl to gangster with curls, until I finally settled to a mouse-hair like experience.
Rita is the sassy, sarcastic, emotionless sister. I just thought it would be fun to have a cold sister roasting people, despite the fact she was redesigned over 2 times, until I settled.
And the others were modelled after the others, also Jimmy, he was from the beginning, he wasn’t supposed to be added, but I found him cool, so I added.
All the characters have a quirky, kid-like, unique, absurd, cartoonish appearance, that was my vision to create a webcomic that will appeal to readers, and contain adult and teenage themes.
Think of Digital Circus and DHMIS, that’s how the style was inspired from.
Now let’s head to designing, stay tuned, don’t exit.
DESINGING AND VISUALISING
What appeals to the audience? Visuals! What makes them enjoy? VISUALS!
Let’s talk about designing and visuals.
You see, look, when you create a story, you have to have amazing visuals, eye-catching posters and characters. I’m not popur myself, but this is what attracts Coin rush to many readers. And not everyone will enjoy, just take time.
So, in 2023, I discovered PowerPoint, a Microsoft app for slide showing, and animation. At first, I never knew so I started experimenting with PowerPoint, I worked on it for months and months, experimenting lighting, dynamic shadows and presets, that’s why Coin Rush is like that, in mid-2024, I made the characters and backgrounds, using a variety of tools.
Coin Rush uses lighting when making the characters, and make them feel warm, cold, dark, icy, I convey them with different designs.
So I started with Cheesy, modeled over 3 times, he begins with an upside down isometric triangle, and I make it yellow, after that, do presets, and add lighting and shadow, I do the eyes, pepperoni, and his crown (he is not a king, he Is selfish) and he made pretty good.
I did the same with others, Cheeseburger was the hardest, because I had to make a cheeseburger and add eyes, over 100 Lighting and presets, and smoothening shots he was created.
The characters look like they were by Blender, thus I use lots of smoothening shots to resemble Blender modelling, idk how to use Blender, and I have tried to no avail, maybe teach me one time.
And Firesyer, a green candy with white spots, he originally had a robotic arm and leg, but I removed them for better hand expressions, and his eyes are smothered a lot than usual.
Tiffany and Rita used the shape for Firesyer but pink-ish and reddish, they use cartoon eyes (for Rita and corn fkes boy)
Creamsweet’s eyes are the hardest, because I added a bck circle outline to them.
I also in my free time, use Krita, to do animation framework, it appears cartoonish.
Here are the characters:
Yeah that’s how I design, and the others (don’t remind me, you will see)
Next page, scroll down and stay tuned.
HUMOR AND STORYLINES.
Here we are, okay let’s start:
Coin Rush uses various types of humor: Ranging from situational humor, dark humor, cutaways, wordpy, satirical humor, toilet humor, and also Spstick humor. The humor sometimes is blue. And also has forms of self-depreciating humor.
One example of humor is here:
Cheesy: Hey Cheeseburger, you got your baseball hat?
Cheeseburger: Nope, I have not! What should I use?
Cheesy: Maybe you can use a cooking stick?
Cheeseburger: You have really smoked, have you? How can you use a cooking stick when pying baseball!?
Cheesy: I don’t know, why do you use a screwdriver instead of hammers sometimes?
Cheeseburger: Because it’s faster, not some Drake fan who hasn’t explored the world watching his skin for 3 hours.
Cheesy: And plus, your toilet really has broken down whilst doing that.
Cheeseburger: Okay, shut up, as if your cheese-nuts has been explored.
Cheesy: Find a baseball, quick!
Cheeseburger: I think I will use you.
Cutaway
Cheeseburger flings Cheesy on the ball, and his eye keeps getting hurt.
Cheesy: Call…Saul.
Yeah that’s how the humor is like, you can describe it yourself.
I make the jokes using my brain, everyday life, and plus I go to school, I watch my friends, and write anything funny. I think of a funny response. I mean I’m like a comedian I can tell you a dark joke.
Stories tempt from the dysfunctional gang running hotel pizza, they go on all sorts of adventures, Season 2 will explore this for you.
And also, some are inspired from many movies and sitcoms, episode names as well.
And Coin Rush isn’t just comedy-first, it has heart and emotional depth, it explores lots of themes your teens go through.
When making a story, use your mind and heart, and pn carefully, the risks, and don’t do for the sake of views. Do for the sake of loving your skill and exploring it: This is Royal Road not Wattpad, and when I say ‘’Wattpad’’ I hate billionaire stories and other stuff, like, this is what your teens love? I’m not discouraging you lol.
But do what you love, okay forget what I said, here is the dark joke.
They are campers sitting on the fire, one says:
‘’Hey where is the food?’’
The other camper says:
‘’I have food!’’
The camper asks:
‘’Where?’’
Then he shoves him in the fire.
‘’We will eat his skin.’’
Now next is…. what else have I not discussed? Comment down below!
Next is: Inspirations.
My biggest inspirations are: SMG4.
Really, this guy makes machinima on GMOD, his stories are funny and interesting, although it declined in Season 14, and I don’t watch it, and maybe…maybe Season 15 Is dumpster. It will still inspire many people.
Also: Family Guy: Seth Macfarne.
Really, Coin Rush contains humor from Seth’s cartoons. The frequent use of cutaways are in Coin Rush, and Cheesy is like Peter, and Creamweet is like Lois.
Also: The Simpsons and Futurama (Matt Groening)
Really, idk what to say, but the Simpsons started and made a cartoon for adults be possible, dark humor be possible, and that’s why.
Plus, Futurama’s humor had the biggest inspiration on Coin Rush, biggest! It made it have dark humor and other sources.
Also: SpongeBob and Tom and Jerry.
The Spstick does, a lot of it helps.
And I watch Netflix every Saturday nights, I see lots of movies and cartoons, I can’t say much but: That Christmas is an amazing animated movie, you should watch it, it’s highly entertaining. I watched it st year in December, took a nice holiday trip that refreshed my batteries.
And Sonic Prime, I love it, it’s an amazing nicely-animated shows.
Also: DS123!
Listen shoutout to @DS123 on Wattpad, that guy made me inspire how the dialogue in Coin Rush should be made, idk what to say, but I love his stories, the drama, the chapters, every month, he posts a story, I tune in to read.
And I haven’t, but I’m going to say a shout-out message on his wall.
And THX you all users on RR!
Your stories are amazing and have inspired Coin Rush really, to the people who are following me, I’ll follow back, I love most of your stories.
Next: Is the end.
Tune in.
Thanks for reading my story, and thanks for taking time to listen and read this, I love sharing this with you, and writing is my passion, whether it’s failure in life, whether people treat you bad, show this in writing, a lot of people really connect, and also continue making amazing stories and keeping your readers happy and consistent.
What I learnt the other weeks is: Date and Time for publish isn’t important, and there is no best time, thanks for that redditor who told me.
No need to respond, but thanks for that.
And let’s not end this amazing story yet, Let’s end it with a bang.
SNEAK PEAK:
Cheesy: Were going to Italy!
Everyone: What?
Cheesy: I decided I have too much money so we're going to Italy, it's a very nice pce!
Creamsweet: Cheesy you've gone too far!
Cheesy: This will be amazing, I'll buy everyone kfc ice cream!
Mr. Corn Fkes Boy: Yaaay!
Firesyer: I want beer!
Cheesy: Well, I want you to SHUT up
Cheeseburger: Look Cheesy, you did it *whispers* At least those gameshow idiots won't find you now....
Cheesy: Yeah...
Tiffany: If we're going to Italy, I'm having an Italian cospy!
Firesyer: Me and Corn Fkes Boy are gonna make a new Italian show, right Corn Fkes Boy?
Mr. Corn Fkes Boy: What?
Firesyer: We will make a new show in Italy, it will be Totally nuts!
Mr. Corn Fkes Boy: Ooh, all about nuts?!
Firesyer: No, its nuts....
Cheesy: All right, I’ve already got our tickets, let's go!
Creamsweet: But Cheesy, if the pne crashes and we don't have a pleasant experience, I'm bming you, and I'll tell the manager to fire you!
Cheesy: *gulp* Don't worry it will be pleasant!
Firesyer: Hey! Wanna see a skit for one of the new shows totally nuts?
Cheesy: What?
Jillian: That's it, you two out!
Cheeseburger: Jillian, you can't just send them out like-
Jillian: They are ruining the moment!
Cheesy: But Jilli, they are two doofuses, and I know you are tired to manage them, but they are fun!
Creamsweet: Yeah....
Jillian: *angry, shouts* I DONT CARE OF YOUR STUPID GROUP, JUST YOU TWO OUT!
Firesyer: You know what, agreed?! I'm out of this stinking spaghetti pce! Mr. Corn Fkes Boy let's get out of this stupid pce!
Mr. Corn Fkes Boy: *he stands up* I'm out....
Firesyer: Let's go and make Totally Nuts Together!
*they leave*
Cheesy: *whispers to cheeseburger* What's wrong with your cousin?
Cheeseburger: She’s Um-She has has a behavior disorder, so yeah...
Cheesy: *whispers* So that expins it all...
Tiffany: What are you two saying about Jillian?
Cheeseburger: *whispers* She has a behavior disorder....
Jillian: Alright everyone let's eat!
Don Raviolio: (calm but commanding) "Ah, my unexpected guests. Welcome to Casa Raviolio."
Cheesy: (grinning) "Casa Raviolio? Sounds like a fancy restaurant!"
Don Raviolio: (raising an eyebrow) "You must be the brave—or foolish—group who thought it wise to disturb my... private quarters."
Cheeseburger: (nervously) "Uh, yeah... sorry about that, Mr. Ravioli Guy."
Don Raviolio: (sternly) "It’s Don Raviolio. And what brings a group of lost souls to my mansion on such a stormy night?"
Creamsweet: (trying to charm) Oh, we were just passing by, and... uh, we thought this was, um, a hotel?
Don Raviolio: (chuckling) A hotel, you say? Funny... most hotels don’t come with guards.
The gnocchi bodyguards step forward menacingly, their arms crossed like doughy boulders.
Tiffany: Okay, okay! We’re lost, alright? We didn’t mean to intrude.
Don Raviolio: (leaning in, inspecting them closely) Lost, eh? Perhaps you were looking for something... more valuable? A treasure, maybe?
Cheesy: (excitedly) Yes! Exactly! You see, we have this map—
Cheeseburger: (elbowing Cheesy) Shut it, Cheese-for-brains!
Don Raviolio: (his eyes narrowing) A map, you say? Very interesting...
Creamsweet: (nervously ughing) Oh, he’s just joking! Right, Cheesy? Just a big jokester!
Don Raviolio: (smirking) Well, jokesters or not, you’re in my house now. And nobody leaves Casa Raviolio without... settling their bill.
Don Raviolio: (ignoring him) You see, there’s a... small problem that I, Don Raviolio, cannot attend to personally. A rival family has been causing disruptions to my... pasta empire.
Cheesy: (excitedly) Is it spaghetti ninjas?! I always wanted to fight spaghetti ninjas!
Don Raviolio: (sternly) No. It’s... the Breadstick Brotherhood.
The room falls silent. The gang exchanges confused gnces.
Tiffany: "The... Breadstick Brotherhood? Sounds like a bakery club."
Don Raviolio: (frowning) "Do not mock them. They are ruthless. They control the bread supply of this town, and without breadsticks, my ravioli empire suffers. No bread, no customers.
Creamsweet: And what exactly do you want us to do about it?
Don Raviolio: Simple. I need you to infiltrate their bakery, retrieve the secret recipe for their garlic butter gze, and bring it back to me. With that, I can create my own breadsticks and recim my rightful pce as the king of Italian cuisine.
Cheesy: (excited) Sounds like a heist! I’m in!
Cheeseburger: (in disbelief) "Are you insane?! You want us to risk our lives for... breadsticks?"
Don Raviolio: (leaning closer, his tone dark) Not just breadsticks. Power. Respect. And, of course... your freedom.
The gnocchi guards crack their knuckles, emphasizing the stakes.
Rita: (sarcastically) Oh, great. Bckmailed by a talking ravioli. This day keeps getting better.
Don Raviolio: (smirking) "Do this for me, and I’ll ensure your safe passage out of Italy. Refuse... and, well, let’s just say the sagna carpet is always ready to roll out."
The gang looks at each other, realizing they have no choice.
Cheesy: (grinning) Alright, gang. Let’s pull off the greatest breadstick heist Italy has ever seen!
Cheeseburger: *shooting* That's all of them!
Cheesy: Yeah, all of them, let's get out of here with the recipe!
They then run...
Cheesy: Tiffany, Rita, Creamsweet, let's get out of here we got the recipe!
Creamsweet: Finally, I was gonna try meth for a second there...
Rita: Excuse me...you want to be on drugs?
Tiffany then comes out crying
Tiffany: I give up my Only Fans career! You were right it was stupid!
Cheesy: Stupid Indeed...
Cheeseburger: Why do you smell like a penis, and blush, and sweat?
Tiffany: I was rizzing the guard up, and then we went too far...
Cheesy: Ta!
Creamsweet: Alright, let's go!
Cheesy: Don...?
Don Ravilio: That's me....and yes....it was a trap I set up!
Cheesy: This is no way to forgive your heroes?
Don Ravilio: HEROS?! You mean Heros that let the Goochi gang know about me?!
Cheeseburger: So, your arguing over a stupid recipe?!
Don Ravilio: Can you shut up!? You weren't supposed to be talking, just sneaking quietly!
Creamsweet: Then why didn't you do it yourself!?
Don Ravilio: No one does anything for me! I send people, and I kill them!
Everyone: What?!
Don Ravilio: Yes...you heard me *whips hosepipe*
Cheesy: Ow....You. gonna kill us?
Don Ravilio: You think I'm kind.... *ughs bitterly* Just wait and see!
Cheesy: *sigh* Yes...Yes....Yes, I did. I just wanted to make the hotel rich and all, I got tired of living poor and us not working enough in the hotel, the profit was low, and I am the boss and I wanted to make everyone happy, and I wanted us to have fun even though we are poor, I wanted us to have a nice life, to go on a vacation, and I just came here to run for the game-show crew, then we find a mafia boss....I'm sorry, this is all my fault...I'm such an idiot...I’m a stupid brother, a failed manager of the hotel, Cheeseburger is right, all of you are right about me, who am I? A nobody....
Don Raviolio roars...
Don Raviolio: Not so fast, you’re not going anywhere!
Everyone turns to him.
Cheesy: Oh, crap, not again!
Don Raviolio: So, come back before things get dangerous!
STAY TUNED THIS MAY…
COIN RUSH SERIES 2: FROM VENICE TO BENICE!
PREMIERS MAY 2, 2025, 8:00 PM
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