when it comes to the story i rlly like how it turned out :D some of my favorite moments were the scenes between emma and jocelyn in chapter 25 and chapter 14 as i feel like i was rlly able to capture their personalities as they navigated this kind of awkward but cute friendship/relationship(?). something i feel i could improve on is meandering as i feel like i meandered a bit when it came to characterizing side characters. i don't think that will be much of a problem in volume 2 since it'll have a stronger, more tense plot (angst incoming). plus everyone will be more used to characters so that'll make things a lot easier.
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a big thank u to everyone reading this! ur support is rlly appreciated ? ?? ? ?? ?
i hope u all stick around for volume 2 and 3! jocelyn's story has rlly has only just begun :D