Greetings readers,
A few days ago, I decided to spend money on Grammarly Pro and spent a few days updating the Prologue, chapters 1 and 2. The story is still the same! I just added more descriptions, cut out the excessive info dumps, and simplified the essential stuff. I had made plans for chapter 3 and wrote half of it before I felt it deviated too much and would drag the story. My previous work had suffered from too much info dumping and dragging, so I wanted to avoid that in this one.
I will be focusing on one POV instead of multiple POVS since I get easily distracted by their plots. I can't guarantee that my writing will suit your expectations or tastes since I will occasionally discuss sensitive stuff.
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Do note that I am not a native English speaker from the West. So if the dialogues don't sound natural, I can only request that you adjust or suggest ways to improve the dialogue in the comments. I will always accept suggestions or advice that improve the work.
Thank you for giving this story a chance, and I hope to release the 3rd chapter in two days.
The story cover is what Arunus will look like later on.