Finally! I have more or less finished fixing my old chapter! Or at least making them readable.

  There are probably still many issues, and some dialogues most likely remain quite unclear since it’s not my fort, but I’ve made many changes to make everything less of a spaghetti plate.

  I should finally be able to resume at a normal pace of 1 chapter/week and even perhaps work on chapters in advance ( believe what you want, but fixing one chapter actually took me as much time as writing one since there were many things to fixe storywise other than errors and mistakes. )

  On another note, since the release of chapter 32, I feel like Finn's POV would not blend well with the main story if I continued to add chapters between normal ones. So, I’m not gonna release a new one for now and will instead release one after the other in a block in the future, probably as a side story. Perhaps I’ll move chapter 32 into that part, but for now, I'll leave it where it is.

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  Also, as for today, I made big changes to some dialogue to give more detail and information to the reader from chapters 1->14 and every then and now. But this still is an experiment, and I don’t know if it made it better or worse. So, if anyone feels something’s wrong with them, or they do appear better than in other chapters, I’d gladly take the feedback.

  I should’ve finished correcting all chapters, even if chapters 18, 24.5, and 26 still need even more so that they satisfy me, especially on dialogues.

  If you have difficulty reading related to anything ( a particular chapter, a dialogue, a sentence ) or overall, feel free to leave a comment so I can work on those weak points.

  Thx for your reading and understanding,

  The author.

  PS, next time will be my little gift to anyone who didn’t drop this story and still reads it to this day.